Me, I give a Rants Us.
by Jellz
I came upon the forum bored
For answers to my questions
To find out if the world out there
Had any useful suggestions
They came from far and also wide
To offer up their thinking
Of fixes for my troubled poems
Quick answers without blinking
The answers they came thick and fast
With and without pants there
Replyings too I gave to you
Poetic and regular answers
Rants sirs, answers
Please don’t remove your pants sirs
My chances won’t enhance sir
If I include a rant sir
Honest and direct I am
In all deliberating dealings
More practical I hope I sound
Rather than a bunch of feelings
Not popular the truth these days
Long Stories get more credit
I only ask of honest intent
Is that you actually “get it”
Respond with thought in every post
Do no react with ire
Consider all the consequences
Do not reply with fire
Rants sirs, answers
I don’t because I can sirs
This poem is a light reply
To those who post in AnswersCare to C/C on a poem that doesn't rant?
I've been away
For reasons diverse
Returned and found
This place is worse.
Far worse even than
When I went away.
I don't think I'll stay.
If I do leave again
I think it's for keeps.
Too many ravening wolves
Attacking
sweet gentle sheep.
In my real life
I'm surrounded
by friends
So, don't need the attention
From those who offend.
The sad few whose lives
Must be so bleak
That their only pleasure
is gained from attacking
the meek.
I believe in dodgy verse, too.
(Love your internal rhyme...you are a rapper par excellence ..........ANSwers/pants/chances/enhance/…Care to C/C on a poem that doesn't rant?
Been seeing this subject - though you've writ it wonderfully well - but don't exactly know what happened and to whom. I see you, of all people, getting a TD on occasion %26amp; I wonder what kind of person would do that to you. (Want me to beat him/her/them up, Friend?) But missed a week or more on here and feel so behind the times. Well, excellent write, great flow %26amp; good humor to this! XOX
Joyful and brilliant - you are shining, dear. ♥
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Flare ups occur and will probably continue. Hopefully all will move on, if not, then at least tacit agreement to disagree and civility in going forward. Good words you posted.
Ire is the great motivator in moderation.
Too passive/aggressive for me, but I liked the style.
ahahaha just the title alone is quite sublime.
Doesn't do much else either. A lot of those verses are seriously dodgy.
hello. I like the poem..
Great poem.
Twas fun to read
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