Monday, December 28, 2009

Care to C/C on a poem that doesn't rant?

Me, I give a Rants Us.


by Jellz





I came upon the forum bored


For answers to my questions


To find out if the world out there


Had any useful suggestions





They came from far and also wide


To offer up their thinking


Of fixes for my troubled poems


Quick answers without blinking





The answers they came thick and fast


With and without pants there


Replyings too I gave to you


Poetic and regular answers





Rants sirs, answers


Please don’t remove your pants sirs


My chances won’t enhance sir


If I include a rant sir





Honest and direct I am


In all deliberating dealings


More practical I hope I sound


Rather than a bunch of feelings





Not popular the truth these days


Long Stories get more credit


I only ask of honest intent


Is that you actually “get it”





Respond with thought in every post


Do no react with ire


Consider all the consequences


Do not reply with fire





Rants sirs, answers


I don’t because I can sirs


This poem is a light reply


To those who post in AnswersCare to C/C on a poem that doesn't rant?
I've been away


For reasons diverse


Returned and found


This place is worse.


Far worse even than


When I went away.


I don't think I'll stay.





If I do leave again


I think it's for keeps.


Too many ravening wolves


Attacking


sweet gentle sheep.





In my real life


I'm surrounded


by friends


So, don't need the attention


From those who offend.


The sad few whose lives


Must be so bleak


That their only pleasure


is gained from attacking


the meek.





I believe in dodgy verse, too.





(Love your internal rhyme...you are a rapper par excellence ..........ANSwers/pants/chances/enhance/…Care to C/C on a poem that doesn't rant?
Been seeing this subject - though you've writ it wonderfully well - but don't exactly know what happened and to whom. I see you, of all people, getting a TD on occasion %26amp; I wonder what kind of person would do that to you. (Want me to beat him/her/them up, Friend?) But missed a week or more on here and feel so behind the times. Well, excellent write, great flow %26amp; good humor to this! XOX
Joyful and brilliant - you are shining, dear. ♥


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Flare ups occur and will probably continue. Hopefully all will move on, if not, then at least tacit agreement to disagree and civility in going forward. Good words you posted.
Ire is the great motivator in moderation.








Too passive/aggressive for me, but I liked the style.
ahahaha just the title alone is quite sublime.
Doesn't do much else either. A lot of those verses are seriously dodgy.
hello. I like the poem..
Great poem.
Twas fun to read

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