When you want to, but can't, what do you do?...I rant?

Rant On My Brother, Rant On





I've had enough of biting this tongue


Twisted two fisted port listed and going down


For the last time


With my fast rhyme


I'll beat you defeat you


cause i see through your clear view


window less shell that keeps in this hell


this reek that i smell the lies that you tell


to deflect the rays being shot


cause your not my equal


this ain't no prequel


won't be no sequel


your not my equal


and I know it


and that's all I need to know





©rad081508





I have my reasons


When you want to, but can't, what do you do?...I rant?
Loved it...am going through pure unmitigated hell trying to transport a just purchased car from next state...the above works well if I switch around a few words. Can you hear my ranting...


I have never seen more catch 22's in my entire life!When you want to, but can't, what do you do?...I rant?
Is this a rap challenge? No, just kidding, but your words do have that angry flow to them which is becoming more and more popular by musical association. Now you must don baggy clothes and voluminous gold chains and begin to talk in a voice that speaks only somewhat understandably.





I have issues with the rap genre, but not with this poem as this is not its intent. You know what you need to know, that is good, and I know what I need to know. Long may your poetry sing, long may I live to hear.
Here's my rant





Picturing you tied firmly to a bed of nails


Gnashing at the teeth and hearing useless wails


You tore out my heart as you played the lovers game


Now I laugh and howl with Satan as death calls out your name





Angry poems make great metal music lyrics. Keep it up you may be writing for the next band.
The title says it all. ';Rant On My Brother, Rant On';.


If I was a Shrink I'd prescribe reading a fun, light-hearted book such as Salinger's Catcher in the Rye. That thing is hilarious.
very good ,,, the anger is controlling her, and works well
If anger be this bite of life, rant on!