What do you think of my poem? I have never written one before but needed a rant...?

You are bored, so you come over


I am busy, but I let you in


You tell me I'm a ‘scenester’


I try not to, but I grin.





I think about how cute you are


You think with the wrong head


When blood returns into your brain


The moment, it is dead.





Do up your fly, cast down your eyes


And slip out through my door


You skulk back to your boyfriend


But you’ll return for more.





I imagine how you hold Him


As I lie alone in bed


You place your kisses on his cheek


My sole companion’s Dread.





I pine instead of sleeping


And sleep instead of work


Logic counts the negatives


Emotion labels you Jerk.





Thoughts of you diminish


Study takes its place


You occupied too much time


Now meeting deadlines is a race.





You are bored, so you text me


I know better, but reply


The situation will repeat


I’m still the ‘Other Guy’.





P.S I failed my test but I don’t blame you


You fail at monogamy but don’t blame me...What do you think of my poem? I have never written one before but needed a rant...?
A poem written for the first time,


Well written, with clarity of mind.


Your thoughts and feelings were written down,


But reality was different, so you found.


Looking around and about for love,


It comes not from the head below,


But the heart and head above.


Keep on doing the things you do,


Reality, not fantasy, will work for you.What do you think of my poem? I have never written one before but needed a rant...?
harry potter is cool


he wants to swim in a pool


he got bullied at HOGWARTS for being small





Ron weasley has loads of bro's


he wants and AFRO


hermione he loves


he send her doves











BUT HARRY IS STILL SO COOL
Is this a gay thing?





... There's no actual poetry here. This is a prose diary entry cobbled into rhyming stanzas - yech! Might be a country 'n western song. Can you yodel?
it is good its better then mine and my friends who write them but i like yours and keep it up
I like it, well done. :)
ehh not so good, sorry, its too high schoolish..